“She’s got you wrapped up in her satin and lace…”
The earth is rounded like the shape of you and
waves of satin drape across every curve, black
in the shadows but sapphire in the sunlight,
silver when the moon comes out. A million
shells lie cracked on pebble beaches, forgotten
sand washed out to sea, replaced with broken
green bottles and plastic six-pack rings and
driftwood. Rotten pieces of people’s homes
and soft-in-the-middle planks splinter with
every footstep that comes to pass. A white sky
washed with mama’s red lace, carnation pink at
dawn flecked with golden promises, merlot
at midnight. Twelve rose petals caress
tear-stained
cheeks and fall, like April’s last shower.
cheeks and fall, like April’s last shower.
Love this. I need to do more creative writing, I fell so badly out of practice after finishing uni. Shame on me. The imagery is strong, I love the 'rotten pieces of peoples homes', 'splinters with every footstep that comes to pass' - beautiful
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You have a real gift with words Katy. The line about "rotten pieces of people's homes and soft in the middle planks" immediately invoked an image of the window frames in the first house UJ and I bought - they were so rotten and wet you could push your finger through them. How skilled are you that the words you write can bring back that memory for me.
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